Daybreak


Ray of sunshine


In the first ray of light that ushers in day, there blooms my hope.
Unfurling as a bud seeking the sun.
Sparkling fingers of dawn push against the darkness.
Transferring its energy into a displaced heart.
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13 comments:

  1. Helene VaillantOctober 3, 2016 at 9:45 AM

    Beautiful poem.

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  2. Teri LOctober 3, 2016 at 10:24 AM

    Thank you so much for your comment. I appreciate it so much. :)

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  3. Amrita PaulOctober 4, 2016 at 9:28 AM

    Fresh and rejuvenating! Loved it :-)

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  4. Teri LOctober 4, 2016 at 9:51 AM

    Thanks!

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  5. Beth CampOctober 5, 2016 at 1:48 PM

    That contrast between light and dark adds to the sense of longing and distance. Lovely.

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    1. Teri LOctober 5, 2016 at 8:27 PM

      Beth, that is a lovely interpretation. Thank you so much.

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  6. Ornery Owl of Naughty Netherworld Press and Readers Roost October 16, 2016 at 12:39 AM

    Beautiful poem. It's as if the words conduct the warmth of the sunrise in the accompanying picture.

    Cie from poetryofthenetherworld.blogspot.com

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  7. MarianOctober 19, 2016 at 11:34 AM

    Pretty.

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  8. Debi SwimOctober 19, 2016 at 2:04 PM

    Beautiful word picture of daybreak

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  9. JimOctober 19, 2016 at 10:44 PM

    Daybreak, the hope of displaced hearts.
    New Day, life goes on.
    ..

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  10. Ann BennettOctober 20, 2016 at 6:00 AM

    Nicely written.

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  11. grapelingOctober 21, 2016 at 4:03 PM

    I like your use of end stops for each line, as though to take a breath, and savor each observation. ~

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