Daybreak


Ray of sunshine


In the first ray of light that ushers in day, there blooms my hope.
Unfurling as a bud seeking the sun.
Sparkling fingers of dawn push against the darkness.
Transferring its energy into a displaced heart.

13 comments:

  1. Thank you so much for your comment. I appreciate it so much. :)

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  2. Fresh and rejuvenating! Loved it :-)

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  3. That contrast between light and dark adds to the sense of longing and distance. Lovely.

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    1. Beth, that is a lovely interpretation. Thank you so much.

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  4. Beautiful poem. It's as if the words conduct the warmth of the sunrise in the accompanying picture.

    Cie from poetryofthenetherworld.blogspot.com

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  5. Beautiful word picture of daybreak

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  6. Daybreak, the hope of displaced hearts.
    New Day, life goes on.
    ..

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  7. I like your use of end stops for each line, as though to take a breath, and savor each observation. ~

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